Wednesday, June 3, 2009

"What the-" Audrina gasped as she ran from the vicious animal, "what in the world are you!" she screamed violently.
Darcy ran past Audrina so quickly she fell and yelled "We're going to die Drina! We're going to die!!!"
"Will you please shut your mouth." said Audrina barely at a whisper.
"Audrina? AUDRINA?" Dracy began searching relentlessly for Audrina, but it was pitch black and she could hardly even see the back of her hand. "Okay Darcy, calm yourself down...Audrina's perfectly fine, she just-she's just trying to hide that's all...I hope."
"Darcy will you shut-up I'm trying to make sure we don't get-" Audrina stopped breathing and looked up "Darcy! Darcy! We're saved look!"
As Darcy looked up she saw that a crack of light was growing even bigger as she stared "Audrina it's Justin!" she wept tears of joy "he came back!!!"
Just then...
RAWR!!!!
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2 comments:

  1. φ♫αnα rαmτrεz♫φJune 4, 2009 at 9:05 AM

    I love your ending and it was so awesome the Rawr! juicy!


    Ur sister♥ Ana Ramirez
    P.S dont fall again

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  2. Ms. GreenJune 18, 2009 at 1:45 PM

    Excellent. This short mini-story shows your mastery of dialogue in all its forms. It tells a complete story while still adding life to your characters and voice to your piece. Very juicy, like Ana said.

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